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*little Cira looks at the world with hopeful kitty eyes*
So. I finished my ![[info]](http://www.insanejournal.com/img/community.gif)
hp_summersmut story yesterday. Well, almost. I need one or two good sentences/paragraphs for the end, but I was so fed up yesterday I couldn't come up with anything not unforgivably cheesy.
Although I'm afraid it already is cheesy, and to avoid that I would have to delete the whole last part, which I can't because that would leave the story at a rather uncomfortable end and I don't want to do this to my recipient. Apart from that, I'm angsting over the smut - too long? too boring? I think it's both - the characterisations, the mood, and the overall question of does this bloody story make bloody sense at all???
*takes deep breath*
Yeah. That's me. My best friend called me self-critical. I wouldn't, but then, she's my friend. ^-^
So, I'd like to have someone other than me read the story. Not so much beta it - although if someone would offer, I'd be more than tnakful!! - but read it and tell me what they think. If the story makes sense. Even, perhaps, what I can do to make Draco behave the way I want him to. Or if time's short, not the whole 26,800 words but "only" the smut bit.
Just in case anyone's interested: it's slash, threesome, and graphic. Um. Please?
hp_summersmut story yesterday. Well, almost. I need one or two good sentences/paragraphs for the end, but I was so fed up yesterday I couldn't come up with anything not unforgivably cheesy. Although I'm afraid it already is cheesy, and to avoid that I would have to delete the whole last part, which I can't because that would leave the story at a rather uncomfortable end and I don't want to do this to my recipient. Apart from that, I'm angsting over the smut - too long? too boring? I think it's both - the characterisations, the mood, and the overall question of does this bloody story make bloody sense at all???
*takes deep breath*
Yeah. That's me. My best friend called me self-critical. I wouldn't, but then, she's my friend. ^-^
So, I'd like to have someone other than me read the story. Not so much beta it - although if someone would offer, I'd be more than tnakful!! - but read it and tell me what they think. If the story makes sense. Even, perhaps, what I can do to make Draco behave the way I want him to. Or if time's short, not the whole 26,800 words but "only" the smut bit.
Just in case anyone's interested: it's slash, threesome, and graphic. Um. Please?