October 11th, 2008

More Misery with "Muggles, Monsters and Magicians"

Voldemort is a villain-hero in Gothic tradition and James Potter was an arrogant arse until he fell in love with Lily Evans in his seventh year at Hogwarts.

I ought to have stopped reading at that point. I must be harbouring a secret fascination with masochism, because I didn't. By the end of the book I was ready to do a Dobby and bang my head against the nearest available hard surface.

You wouldn't believe what that woman wrote.

Try this )

Help, please?

Is there anyone willing to read my fest fic for me? No SPaG, just read through and tell me whether it's okay so far or not. Perhaps tell me what I could do better.

There's no smut yet. I meant to write that today, but I'm so unhappy with the last bits I wrote yesterday that I can't go on. And for some reason I really can't figure out what it is I don't like about the last couple of hundred words.

Um, the fic's 21k so far. Meant to be Harry/Charlie, but mentions other pairings. DH compliant.

Anyone? Please??
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